Kevin G.

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This is temporary until I can make a covie character later.

UNITED NATIONS SPACE COMMAND DEFENSE FORCE
PERSONNEL COMMAND (PERSCOM)

CAREER SERVICE VITAE

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Unit Information
Command: 27th Marine Expeditionary Unit
Regiment: 12th Regiment
Battalion: 1st Battalion
Company: Oscar Company
Platoon: Second Platoon
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[Durant, M.]

Maxmikester,

There are several glaring issues with this application that need to be addressed. I would first like to advise you to reread the rules for posting a character application.

This is an incomplete application. Barring that, it appears you merely copied from Killinger's application and edited a handful of fields. In its current form this application does not meet our standards.

Go to the application template and scroll down to the bottom of the page. There will be a code there with our application template inside. Copy and paste that blank template into a thread with your characters name in it.

All fields must be sufficiently filled out before posting as per our rules. Incomplete applications will be denied, as we do not allow them. There are plenty of fields missing from this application, making it incomplete. We judge whether or not to accept a character by the information contained within an application and the amount of work it appears the player put into the character. We want diverse, three-dimensional characters.

I cannot in good conscious accept this application as-is. I encourage you to try again and post a full, complete application. Also, any Marine characters that will be a part of Second Platoon, Oscar Company have to be permanent characters. Not guest characters.

Guest characters is for everyone else besides the Marines of Second Platoon. I.e. Marine Company Commanders, Covenant characters, Army troops, civilians, etc. Secondly, your application would not be in the Guest CSV area until it is approved by the Staff.

So, it pains me to say that this application is DENIED. You may reapply at any time, and it is my hope that you will.